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thank you for letting me put
my hands on your body

my grip still fits your thigh
i have kept the pressure specific
to you

(this came naturally)

on your body again
I found the places I was forced
to give up

some of them laid in wait for me
but most had moved on in order to survive

                                              what we did

what
we       are
          


                                  doing.


for letting me wrap
my fingers around hips
that metronome
                      against me
                               on me-

                                                                    far.



                         and then your weight shifts




back to me,
                               tactfully
                            

           
   
                                                    and taste
                                                                     lessly.
:iconnonamepsalmist:

Author's Comments

It's good to know I haven't lost it.


Or lost you.

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I love it. Very very much.

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“Cleanse ye your eyes, so that ye behold no man as different from yourselves. See ye no strangers; rather see all men as friends.”
:iconstaralities:
That was great, love.

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Butterfly wings and fairy tale kings
:iconohsostarryeyed:
i missed your writing. this being the first one i've seen in awhile, i'm glad it wasn't disappointing. wonderful job :heart:

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i like to
put haikus where they
don't belong.
:iconlovespoon:
metronome was good word to use.

Good poem.

:teddy:

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"Women may fake orgasms, but men fake entire relationships."

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:iconnonamepsalmist:
I missed it too.

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Take me anywhere- just not out of context.
:iconolobocanta:
:worship:


just amazing work
:icondrunken-splice:
NIcely crafted. I think the typographical effects add a lot placed later in the poem. The opening lines are very well stated. Great job :)

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`poisonedrose - thanks brett <£...ahhh brit love
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:icontimeraider:
Yes. Wonderful poem.

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