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While we slept,
you strapped your arm around
my chest like armor and possession,
like ‘this one belongs to me.’ Together, we are
teaching the things that haunt us
to lie down in their graves.

Here, like this
your demons say to mine as
they demonstrate the art of behaving.
Together, we secure their
broken bodies and set them into six feet of
downward motion.
        (but we do not follow
           we cannot go in their stead)

They do not know they’re dead. It’s
always a blow when we break the news.
They find themselves jealous of our
human skin and our inhaling
                                 exhaling chests.
(we are too kind
to show that we are more alive without them
   that losing them is not a loss)

But they sleep after many lessons and
much persuasion, and then
      so do we.
©2007-2009 ~nonamepsalmist
:iconnonamepsalmist:

Author's Comments

For Jenny, who holds me in her sleep.
Who holds me cities away, and brings me lemons and pens.

For Jenny, who I cannot scare away.
She is why I stand up straighter now.

Daily Deviation

Given 2007-08-26

Teachers to the Dead by =nonamepsalmist. 'A beautiful poem that shows the power of conquering our demons together.' (Suggested by ~LineCount and Featured by `PoeticWar)

Comments


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:icontheunbeingdead:
i do envy you so, dear.
:iconquitelife00:
I'm glad that you were able to conquer your inner demons, at least in this poem.

--
Grammar has rules.
Beca"u"se if it, didnt; sentences w!ould l.ook like- t'his.

~nonamepsalmist

:pride: member of *GLBT-Pride-Club
:iconwrenwatcher:
I love this poem, and I love that you've found someone so good for you.
:iconnonamepsalmist:
You have no idea.

It's funny that someone I know strictly online notices these things, and can be glad for me in that way.

Oh, dA.
How I love you.

--
Take me anywhere- just not out of context.
:iconnonamepsalmist:
Thank you.
This poem, in a lot ways, helped me do that, I think.

And how are you, by the way?
Tell me about you.

--
Take me anywhere- just not out of context.
:iconquitelife00:
I shall send a note!

--
Grammar has rules.
Beca"u"se if it, didnt; sentences w!ould l.ook like- t'his.

~nonamepsalmist

:pride: member of *GLBT-Pride-Club
:icongeneratinghype:
I stumbled across this, and I am so glad I did. I think you've just described every facet, fear, and struggle of my relationship. Honestly, I feel this--it's beautiful; it's lovely. Those first two stanzas, especially, hit me in uncomfortable places.

Thank you kindly.

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Suggest a Lit DD today!
:icontweekfreak:
beautiful. i wish i could come up with more words to describe it but my head's a little foggy. it's very, very gorgeous.
:iconnonamepsalmist:
From a writer, I respect a great deal- this means things.
Real things.

And thank you.

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Take me anywhere- just not out of context.
:iconnonamepsalmist:
Haven't heard from you in a while.

Things okay on your side of the world?

(and thank you.)

--
Take me anywhere- just not out of context.

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